Another way to pass your time

Hello all,
a while ago I started a little story, initially meant to entertain a certain member of the GAMEOVER alliance. It soon started out to be both entertaining for myself as well as a good language excercise (I'm not a native speaker).
If you like, have a look here:

http://mcgreen.awardspace.com/

There is also a forum for your feedback. So please tell me what you think. Thanks!